The thief said that the girl couldn't come with him now, because she lost her baggage in the Sweden airport. The parents weren't so sure, so the thief had to come back with the girl. It was a big hit to his plan, because he was (surprise, surprise) scared of girls. He would do almost anything to get away from the girls. So he only had one hope, to get rid of his phobia. So then he had to visit his cousin who was living in Sweden. His cousin was a psychiatrist once, but now he was just jobless. He took his stuff, said goodbye to "his" parents and went to the bus stop. He went on a bus and travelled to his cousin's place. The thief arrived at a really bad time, because his cousin was drunk. Totally drunk. He said hello and asked for his help. The cousin was ready to help him, only if the thief paid him 720€. It was a lot, but the thief knew that he would get more from "his" parents. So he paid the money and his cousin started to do the work. After about 30 minutes the work was done. Then the cousin asked for more money, and the thief paid it. Then he left. Because the thief had lost quite a bit of money, he didn't buy a bus ticket. It was really stupid of him, because the inspector was on the bus and caught him. He had to pay a fine of 120€ and leave the bus. He did it and started walking to the store. There was a prostitute in front of the store. The thief told her that he needs her help. The prostitute started to do the thing. The thief said no, no, because he needed some other help. The prostitute looked exactly like the girl he needed. So he paid the prostitute 100€ to come with him. So there they went, to meet the parents. When the parents saw them, they were happy to see their son and her girlfriend. It was really good, they had a dinner and so on. But then the biggest problem started. Because the thief's cousin was drunk, he said some things that he didn't mean to say. He said that whenever the thief drinks some alcohol, he must talk about one sin of his life. And they had a lot of alcohol there. So the thief talked about all the things he had done, including the surgery and stealing their real son's ID card. The parents were really angry, so they took away all the money, the house and the ID card that he had stolen. And of course they called the police. The thief had lost a lot of money that day and couldn't get back to London, because the picture on his ID card was completely different and he had to go to the court. That's what he got for stealing. The End.
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The fun part is that you can continue it and ill choose the best comment for the next chapter
The Action starts at London. I named it: The lonely thief (Any corrections are very appreciated as i know it has a lot of things to be fixed, also ill post the next chapter in the OP once i pick the ones that i like most if there are any at all)
A couple went into the metro,they bought tickets before entering,then they went in,sat down and were talking to each other quiet. When the last station was approaching a guy in uniform told them that the system failed and their tickets were invalid,so he can't let them get out of the metro before paying again for the tickets. They had to pay and they did, They paid extra 20 euros for the tickets. That guy left the metro while the couple went to the toilet,because they couldn't go before. In the meantime the guy who took money from them was actually a thief,he sat on the ground infront of the metro with some junky clothes and with a mask covering his face,since it was cold, but he used it so they can't recognize him. Luckily for him,he found an guitar left on the wall,he took off his hat putted it infront of him and when he saw the couple approaching he started playing and singing some love song on the guitar ( they didnt recognize him since it was too loud with all the people around) he knew they are a couple and he hit exactly their favorite song.They liked it so much that they payed 10 euros to him and explained everything about their plans- going to Sweden,their parents bought them new house and all the plans. Then they went walking to the street, then the thief stole a taxi and bought a hat like the ones that taxi drivers wear (with the collected money, he didn't had any). He started slowly chasing them and when they stopped walking he stopped the taxi and offered them a drive,because it was too cold(using accent so they can't recognize him). They agreed of course. They wanted to go to the airport,the drive went smooth,when they arrived on the airport the couple payed him 30 euros. They went on the airport waiting for the plane,but there was some problem with the plane and it was announced that it'll be late. The thief left the taxi, and the guys who were selling tickets were to a lunch break. The guy took their places, putted on their clothes and called the couple as he knew they are rich. He said they can pay now,because later theres gonna be big queue. He asked for ID card and 1000 euros(They wanted to travel to Sweden). He asked the couple to wait few minutes. When they sat down again,waiting,he copied the original ID card of the guy and then called them back,gave them false tickets and the printed(copied) ID card as he kept the original one for himself and the original tickets. When the original sellers of tickets went back,they called the first ones in the queue which was the couple,they gave them the tickets,but the sellers told them that they are fake and that they have been scammed. Now they started to figuring out and connecting the puzzle. The thief went to a surgery operation to a doctor which was close friend of him, he gave him the ID card and told him that he wants the same identity,the same look. While the couple started begging them and explaining them that once they get to Sweden their parents will pay the tickets,but the sellers didn't agreed as it's breaking their rules. The thief by that time, finished his surgery, while the couple were in big troubles as they had no money left and no food,no nothing. All they had was London. The thief went back to the airport,while they were walking away from it, he catched that plane to Sweden(Knowing that "his" parents are waiting for him with the new house and a lot of money). He finally arrived the parents were there,waiting for him,they looked confused as they didn't saw the girl with him.
Now how you gonna continue that story
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