I just take a quick look for a bit, and while your pronounciation is good enough for me, you tend to mumble around when you read some text. You might also need to be more expressive since your way of talking is kinda flat most of the time. That's all i think. There were other nitpicks like how you look nervous sometimes, but i'm sure you'll eventually come over it with time.
Good job btw :)
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Yea, I'm probably not going to keep reading stuff. I figured I'd do it for the whole Amnesia playthrough, since it was good practice, but now I'll just give people a heads-up to read it for themselves. And I'm sure that being more expressive / less nervous will come naturally, it's just going to take some time. It's only going to get better from here!
Thanks! :)
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don't get me wrong though. i'm not against you reading the text, but when i watched it in other let's plays, the voice is usually expressive and clear. it's up to you whether you want to read it or not though, just want to make sure that you don't take my feedback wrongly. and yes, i'm sure you'll get better :)
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(I hope it's okay for me to bump this.)
I have just uploaded a new video, and I feel like you can already see a big improvement! Would love to get some feedback.
Thanks!
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Hey!
I recently started a youtube channel, where I'm mostly going to post Let's Play content, and would love to get some feedback. I'm definitely aware that my commentary needs some improvement, but considering I just started, I feel like it could be a lot worse.
I currently only have a handful of videos uploaded, but I'm hoping that I'll be able to post a new video every day.
Please let me know what you think. Thank you!
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCJ2o2lOFQFLUWVYBH0ADJYQ
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