Can I get some Feedback on a video? :>

those dump trucks.
must be joker or colby?
been playing apb for 1 year)

dat song.

That was really funny, subscribed after watching some of your other videos.

I know jack sh*t about making pro YT vids but I find the red text hard to read (colorblind)

Anyone else able to give some feedback? Sorry for asking, just always been interested in making my Career involve videos so this is a time I can practice editing while in classes. Again, I appreciate all Constructive criticism. :D

Not bad! I found it pretty entertaining even without having played the game, I think you're on to something there. :-)

Hey if you want to go ahead and add me as a contact at my channel. I am working on getting the steamgifts youtubers together for some collaberations.