After his daughter was kidnaped, John Shephard was hired by the army to save his the presidents daughter. An alien race had captured her. But now John would make them pay.
He gets a call on vacation. "Hello!" says John. "What's the problem?"
"My daugter it captured!" shouts the president.
"I'm on ti" amd John hang up the phone.
He got in his mako car and drove to the alien hideout.
At the door there are many aliens but John got shotgun and blasted them all. After tgat there were more so Johnn used specual abilite to fight with more power. And they died to. Then John saw an elevator and push the down arrow. John Sheepherd waited.
But the eleveator popped open and there was a spider monster! It waas a suprise a tack!
John had a melee weapon with him and busts the spider open.
At the end of the fort, John sees the alien king Saren.
"Wahahaha! I bet you want the presidnets daughter back!" yelled Saren as he held her.
"I'm going to take her to home! Even if it kils me!" Shouted John and he throws a gernade at Saren. And Saren blow up. And Saren dies.
"Yoiu win this time Sheperd!" And Saren teleleported away.
"No! And the presidents daughter wa sgone."
"I have failed you!"
Back at the President house John said "I could not svae her."
"Good," said the president. "She is one of us now."
And his eyes glowed red.
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Hijacking to say your story reminds me of...
FULLL LIFFE CONSUQENCUES!!!!
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Or DOOM: Repercussion of Evil
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Thanks for Ashley Williams, Sleepy! :D XD
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You're awesome SleepyCat, thanks for the chance :)
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Danke =3
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