not into sonic, but the story was engaging, so I stayed on till the end. :)

Interesting... :P

Cool story, bro

Nice one. Got a few good chuckles out of it, for example from the "detrimental for my health" part or the servants names.
Big fan of dry jokes here :D

I noticed that hardly anyone dared to leave a comment in fear of interrupting the story :)

Your story was entertaining and engaging. I'll be back for part two ^ ^
& Thanks for all the Sonic giveaways! Oh, the memories!

thanks for the train and the story. Waiting for part two.

Thanks!

Interesting c:

But for real, it was nice and easy to read. Do you write more or just few stories?

Btw, did anyone ever wonder why sonic use a car? :P

View attached image.

Enjoyed your little story! Looking forward to read the next one :)

Cute little story :) and thank you for the big chance at sonic!

Thanks for the story.... funny that still to this day texter doesn't always deliver!

thx

Not bad at all.

Thank You!

thanks and nifty tale

What a absolute lovely way to present a train. I was a bit disappointed it did not have an end. Well I just have to wait to read the rest of the story.

cool with the story - and thx