Only thing I can see is in the second line, you're missing a verb. You don't do what much these days? Hang out? Spend time together? Other than that looks like a nice lil speech :)
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"then" at second line seems inappropriate as a connect, I would use "however" as you're going against the fact that you don't talk these days.
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"f it wasn't because of you, i wouldn't be a changed person."
If it wasn't for you, I would be a different person.
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The first line was yours.
The second line was my improved English version.
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Agree with sviat...
instead of the 'and' just pause.. don't say 'and' :)
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Just to combine a bit of suggestions others have offered:
I know we don't talk much these days.
But/however, I wanted you to know that you are everything to me, my brother, my father, my mother and my sister.
You are my world.
If it wasn't for you, I would be a different person.
You taught me the values of honor, respect, and hard work.
I Love You Brother.
I wish you a very happy birthday.
It's a very nice speech. An added thing, the line "If it wasn't for you, I would be a different person" If you are trying to emphasize that you've made positive changes thanks to them, then you could say "I wouldn't be the person I am today if it wasn't for you".
Anyways, whatever you say, it's obviously coming from the heart, so they'll love it I'm sure!
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this one is really nice! And yes, everything you say is from the heart. I'm sure your brother will love it.
Also Happy birthday to him!
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that is very sweet of you. I'm sure your brother will notice the love, more than your grammar :)
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Today is my bother's birthday.!
Sad no secret giveaway here
I just wanted you people to read my speech, that i am going to say to my brother in front of a lot of people.
"Hey!
I know, we don't much these days.
But then i just wanted you to know that you are everything to me, my brother, my father, my mother and my sister.
You are my world.
If it wasn't because of you, i wouldn't be a changed person.
You made me become a man of honor and respect and hard work.
I Love You Brother.
I wish you a very happy birthday."
Please let me know if any of these to be corrected.
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