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Unsung Melody

The tune rises from the keys
Like butterflies dancing upon a breeze
Lilting and trilling
they seem so fulfilling
as they slowly crescendo
into a somber dirge

My hate my pain
in each note contained

This is the melody of my heart.
carried away on wings of song

the winds whistle
through the thistle
a stream trickles
down thawing icicles
as the calls of the wren
carry out across the glen

My Dreams My hopes
contained in the notes

A zephyr carries this song
A melody from my heart

Thanks :)

9 years ago
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Honestly I can't give you valuable opinion. I'm very picky about poems, and to fully appreciate them I like them in ym native language. You know how it is, I understand the words, but I can miss some meaning hidden in certain sentences (I can't remember how you call it in english, phrasals maybe). I hope some otehr people will be able to give you good review :)

9 years ago
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Like a double meaning?

9 years ago
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Yes and no. Double meaning is one thing, but sometimes combination of few word means something totally different than words would suggest. I can't recall any examples in english, but I hope you know what I mean.

9 years ago
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Thanks for the train!

9 years ago
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