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So I recently won this in a giveaway. I installed it and then realized I wasted my precious points. Therefore I purchased a gift copy and decided to place this scourge on another persons shoulders. Now for the poem.

Dying Mind

Everything in life is a choice
By choosing right or wrong you give it a voice
You say it wasn’t an option you can’t control what you do
always hurting those closest to you
There were unhallowed secrets you wished to preserve
She loved you more than you could ever deserve
Making another person start over again
You turned from your lover to her best friend
Watching behind you cringing at every sound
How could you presume that you wouldn’t be found
You’ve finally shut the last door
Blood spilt upon the floor
You think of all you must leave behind
As Darkness envelopes the dying mind

In case you want to see something interesting read this from the bottom up.

I like the dual reading. Consider using a vertical font / arrangement so the reader isn't sure whether to read left -> right or top -> bottom.

9 years ago
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You threw me off with the vertical font/ arrangement part. Either it's getting late or I don't get it :p

9 years ago
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I mean, turned 90 degrees to the right.

9 years ago
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Thanks :)

9 years ago
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My hearth beats like a potato chips
my hearth is a saxofone therefore I say to you my love
that i want you for me
and done..

9 years ago
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Thanks for spreading the scourge !
Came in through the train's back door and missed the comment that you didn't want thanks unless one was the winner.

Great poem. I actually like reading it from bottom to top better than top to bottom.

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The scourge is spreading under my skin

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thx

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