Not a bad poem, I'm not into poetry but I think it was decent :]
Thanks for pointing de wey
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Thanks for the ride, Melrir!
That poem has a real melancholic feel to it. Whatever grief it's about, exactly, it evokes the feeling very well.
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Hello, everyone. Long time no see! Here is another train for all of you. Please ride responsibly! I also found one of my old poems. Could you guys and gals tell me what you think of it? Thank you.
Without much ado: where is da queeen?!!!!
Poem:
A flower, a petal
Days long gone
I look at the stars and see but shadows
She loved the stars
And she was mine
But all stars must fade,
And thus the darkness remains
If only I could have been a star too.
PS: Add me on Steam if you want. I always like that.
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