Can you translate this sentence into Korean and Mandarin/Cantonese?

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I am hoping to translate the following sentence into Korean, Mandarin, and/or Cantonese. Advice from native speakers greatly appreciated!

"Nota Bene: The winners who activate their Steam keys within 24 hours after receiving them, they will be inducted into the sender's whitelist, where more dreams come true!"

3 years ago

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Peg4sus

Depending on what you mean by 'more dreams come true'

注意：在收到Steam密钥后24小时内激活的获奖者，他们将被添加到白名单，在那里有更多的梦想成真!

3 years ago

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Aerctaure

It looks good. Thanks for the help!

3 years ago

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Peg4sus

You are welcome :) Just hit me up when you need another one

3 years ago

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3 years ago

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TheHealingCow

Just FYI: reddit is a good place for this kind of question as well. You can engage specific translation communities to help. I've done this before for a Latin translation.

3 years ago

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cams02

공지: 받은 스팀 키들을 24 시간 안에 사용한 우승자들은 보낸이의 화이트리스트에 추가돼서 더 많은 꿈들이 이루어질 것입니다!

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Aerctaure

Thanks for the reply! That should be handy the next time I happen to have a Korean winner.

3 years ago

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