Nah I think it goes both ways, I've seen it used equally towards both genders. It is cliche but a bit uncommon to see in stories, and from the way the abuser talks it seems like it would be a word he would use frequently anyway, almost like a nickname for the child? I don't know, it's all I can think of
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"Shit" or "Fuck" are basic, but serve their purpose adequately. Plus, it's probably more realistic- I doubt an abusive parent would have the brainpower required to come up with anything eloquent.
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You'd be surprised then, at how much pleasure such sadistic individuals take in their efforts to hurt others. Much like any hobbyist, they tend to go the extra mile for their pursuit.
..that being said- no, you're right. I've only ever encountered basic variations in that regard, with little shit by far being the one I'd expect to hear.
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Dick handler, cock gobbler, cumstain, jizz rag, fetid shit, twat, fuck peice, arsehole, shit, mistake...
Could go the other way and changed the dialogue...
Should have pulled out...
Should have wiped you off the bedsheets...
Been adopted...
Depends what you are going for, authenticity, black humour, realism, impact...
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Hey guys I'm righting a story that has a abusive parent as one of the main characters. In a scene that I'm writing i need someone to help me out with a word to call a child. Something that is extremely cruel/ traumatizing. Below i have the scene written and need some help.
WARNING content may be uncomfortable for some
I looked at my mother's face and saw her cry of joy mixed with the fear of what could happen if caught. I ran across the train tracks and expected to see my mother on my heels. I no longer felt the safety of being in her arms for a moment and quickly looked back. Carver stood holding her by the throat with a rusty shard of metal from the ground.
Carver: Listen here boy. Either you come back across these tracks or I kill your mother.
Cries came from my mother’s face as the thunder roared above.
The blade slowly began to break the skin as he yelled out again.
Carver: 5 seconds you little ____, otherwise your bitch of a mother gets put down.
Segment of a child's past that he reflects on when he gets older. Just need some help with that word in the blank. Thanks a lot guys :D
I'll let you know when the full story is out.
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