Guys check my music and tell me your opinion :D

Very beautiful , i like much , thank for create it

nice!! thanks =) keep on writing and recording!! =) you're good!

not bad, have one for inspiration https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2A-3aLYdC8

I hope you take the following in the nicest way possible. I intend for it to be constructive criticism. If you're not interested in that, don't read.

Your music skills are perfectly fine, but your production skills are not. Some of the notes sound a bit too harsh on the recording, and just playing around with the equalizers would already make a world of difference. running a filter or two with the right setting would make it an absolute joy to listen to.