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Just uploaded a video and i need some feedback on it please.
Trying to improve as much as possible so any comments would be greatly appreciated.
Link : http://bit.ly/28WFkBK

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Maaatesaak

Thanks! :)

7 years ago

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llrefael

I have no interest in Overwatch
But thanks!

7 years ago

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FoxyBabushka

No problem :) Thats fine, its my first on Overwatch so it may not be too good :)

7 years ago

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JoshuaNorton

thank you very much :D

sadly, overwatch is not my kind of content though :o
but, maybe a bit more structured in your script, i mean what you are going to say in the video, at which pace and all that.

7 years ago

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FoxyBabushka

Yeah i dont tend to do scripts just sort of points i develop on and i do it in one take because im lazy hahaha thanks for the feedback buddy. Some people have told me to slow down sometimes and try to say things clearer but my accent is another language than English so its tough, cheers dude.

7 years ago

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JoshuaNorton

yeah, i noticed that one-take thingy a bit xD
anyway, thats just what i noticed from youtubers i watch that scripts and several recording session tend to produce much better videos ;)
about the pace/speed, well that is your personal preference, with a proper script, fast pace of what is said can easily be as good as a slow paced video ;)

and for a non-native speaker, you do pretty well(at least for me as another non-native).

7 years ago

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FoxyBabushka

Ive never been the scripted type but i should really try to be with informational videos tbh, thanks for pointing that out, no idea why i didnt realize that...
oh and i am a native speaker its just where im from no one can understand me, even people from the UK hahahha.
Seriously thanks so much for the help, definitely see what i can change for my next video :D

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JoshuaNorton

well, glad i could be of help then :)

ah, well nevermind then xD
but as i said, i could understand you quite good actually, maybe it is no problem with that specific video then?

have a nice one and good luck with the channel :)

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Crocross

Thank you ^.^