Nothing to say haha

bump~

It sounds very messy (no offense) to me. Are that two seperate guitar tracks playing through each other?

Unstructured, cluttered, the theme keeps repeating, which you could get away with if it was more interesting and the playing itself is unclean. The middle section is interesting, but you wasted that potential. Take what you have and work on that. Don't just hammer the same melody over and over and try not to skip the beat every second. Like it's at 50 different tempos over the track. I get how BPM isn't important here, but you never get to rest as you listen.

I hesitated to comment because it's almost entirely negative and sounds pretentious, but maybe you find something valuable in there and it's all about Maybe In My Head. Didn't listen to the other one yet.