im a game reviewer as was wondering what you guys think of my review

A good start, but I think it lacks information if about the game is actually fun to play/if you did you enjoy it.

From what you wrote I would guess you rated this game somewhere between 3-7/10. To me, it's that unspecific.

A good start like tso184 said. Maybe put also some Info´s about the requiements and maybe your Set Up. Also an really static Point System would be good. Also like tso184 said some that really says how much points you give the game. Or even an mark like in shool ^^.

thanks for feedback guys and girls

Gotta work on your phrasing, diction, and punctuation.

Good reviews need to be systematic. Even more so if you're planning on making it a regular thing.

Also, are you spoiling the end of the game? I would have no idea since I haven't played it, but sure sounds like it.

ok thanks

A suggestion: try to make a video from the review, I think you will get more traffic to it.

thanks