Hello, my name is tatsumi, I am part of a small team of independent video game developers from steam. Lately we are seeing that our first game Huusuienbu story1 does not have many reviews, we are currently looking for pages of steam healers who are willing to make a constructive or informative review about our game, if interested you can comment on this publication or contact me to talk about this topic .......!

Huusuienbu story1
https://store.steampowered.com/app/622670/Huusuienbu__story1/

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Would you make a positive or informative review of our game?

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Oh wow, that looks like a pretty decent game, and not the usual asset flip crap. Looks like you're already getting some good feedback.
Good luck with the curators and reviews and all that jazz.

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thank you friend, we always appreciate good criticism and constructive criticism

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Do you want to try it ?

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Thanks, but I'd rather you send copies to good writers who can get your game the exposure you want.
I do appreciate the offer, though.

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Finding good writers in different languages took some time, most developers wont invest. Everything that matters: Followers...

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Are you a writer?

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thanks for responding to this publication, I will contact you :D

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Ok

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Happy Cake Day, Tzaar!

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thanks for responding to this publication, I will contact you

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Add more languages :D

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if we are working on that, only now we do not have so much budget

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GL with that

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It looks rather interesting; if I get the funds to pick it up, I can take a look.

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I hope when you buy it, have fun in a big way

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I like the game graphics. It's like a cute version of FFT.
Also already on my wishlist.

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I know that when you try it you will like it and have fun

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i can give you an honest review in exchange for a key if you want.

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this. he should ask for a review, period.

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I think it's reasonable to ask for the review to be constructive or informative. Nobody gets anything of value from a blank review or a review that just says "1337" or "[insert character name] is best waifu". If he just wanted worthless "Recommended" reviews to manipulate the review rating, he could create fake accounts but he's trying to get honest feedback, which should be applauded.

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Well, of course a blank review is not worth it. I just think if you say "I'll give you a key for a positive review" definitely doesn't sound good but, as other user points out, probably he just doesn't know how to express himself correctly in English.

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Yeah, I think he is trying to behave honourably and it's just a translation issue. He uses "constructive or informative" in the body of the text - I didn't even notice that the question was worded as "positive or informative".
https://youtu.be/NKedz8vFjHA

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I see he edited the post, it said positive at first but is a good thing he changed that

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I think they aren't speaking English well and are just trying to get valuable review, as in constructive :)

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ok, in a moment I will add you and talk to you

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didn't get contacted O_o

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Hi, I would be interested in reviewing Huusuienbu story1. I have this on my wishlist as well because I enjoy these type of games.

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ok, in a moment I will add you and talk to you

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Whoa. It looks really good. Wishlisting it for now. I might turn around, and buy it though later this week. I hope you find some curator's!

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really thank you very much for your support, I hope you can spend hours of fun with our game

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The game looks good, I can give it my critique if you want. Just don't expect short reviews from me :p I tend to write a bit much. I look up to a lot of game reviewers.

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perfect in a moment I will add you so that we can talk

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I would recommend having your game's Steam description be re-written by someone who is fluent in English and decent at writing.

Your screenshots appear like you put time and effort into the game, but the same cannot be said for your game description. The current description is very amateur, poorly translated, and forms a poor first impression.

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+1
Also try to add some screenshots of the English version that showcase the translation quality.

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+1 to both, from the screenshots one might think this is a Japanese only game. The entire description is also quite lacking.

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+1

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thank you very much for the friend recommendation, we will take into account what you say, since we want to improve

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You're welcome. My view is that the Steam page is your first impression, thus you want to have a good, clear, professional quality description (even if it doesn't actually require a profession to write one) to present your game as a professional, quality product.

If your description is a confusing, poorly organized mess that looks like it was carelessly put through Google Translate, it makes me think that you would be similarly careless with your game. If you don't care about your description, what's to say that you care about your game?

If your description is clear, well presented, and seems professional, it raises my expectations of your game.

For example, don't just write "RTS+TD+ADV", write out what it means. I may not be familiar with the acronyms (what's ADV?). Better yet, write out a complete sentence, such as: "Huusuienbu is a role playing game that blends together real-time strategy and tower-defence combat." I'm assuming that's accurate, as I don't have the game.

Likewise, the whole "story1 / story2" thing is unnecessary, confusing, and shouldn't be in the description. That should be in a developer update post, the description should focus on just describing the game.

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Adv is the standard shorthand for Adventure. While I can't speak to the developer's intentions on this specific utilization, they do mention "adventure mode" and include "adv" as part of a list of various genres, so it's likely being used as per normal expectations. That said, it probably shouldn't be listed in all-caps, as it's a shorthand rather than an acronym. The only generally intuitive acronym that comes to mind for adv is "adverb", and I don't feel as though that quite fits. :P

I went to the page to try my hand at rewriting the description but.. yeah, without actually having played the game, I can't really make sense of a good portion of that description.

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Yeah, I figured it probably meant Adventure, but others might look at ADV and be confused. Advanced, Advertising, AD Vision, Average Daily Value, Acoustic Doppler Velocimetry, Acoustic Droplet Vaporization, Aleutian Disease Virus, Australian Defense Vessel, Adventure Visual novel... the possibility for confusion is there. There are better ways to describe a game than ADV. We have to remember that people are often easily confused. You wouldn't believe how many people I've run into in stores that didn't know if the Wii U was the Wii 2, or an add-on for the Wii, or a peripheral, or what it was - and this was a couple years after it came out, so it wasn't even release associated confusion.

Adventure Mode itself can be confusing. Is that the story / campaign mode, or is it a separate mode? And, if so, what is the default mode?

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That looks like a very fun and interesting game.
I'm not a curator but I'd be interested in reviewing it if you still need more reviewers :)

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I must say that I love the art style in this. I'm not much for RTS games but have played my fair share of them to date. Not sure I'd be helpful reviewing a game in a genre I'm not super fond of. Good luck with finding reviewers either way!

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Thank you for your words, my friend

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Absolutely, you've got to support indie devs who show promise. I'm planning on grabbing a copy of "Bright Memories" for the same reason, solo dev showing promise.

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I am interested in giving it a try, I'll for sure give a review if I enjoy it.

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BUM!

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I can probably put you in contact with several independant Steam reviewers and Curators. Rules on SG doesn't allow me to post a link here, so contact me on Steam if you want to know more.

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Of course I will get in touch with you, thank you very much

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I'm not the best writer but I'd love to write a review for you!

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I'll get in touch with you friend

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hello friend, could you send me your curators page so I can send you the keys through steam curator connect

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I usually do reviews and i may be help you about this specially i usually give positive reviews but i do add bad sides of the game if it is good for you im ready

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hello friend, could you send me your curators page so I can send you the keys through steam curator connect

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i do personal reviews and most of them turkish but i can do in english as well

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I have a little curator page (i think i can't put a link here, rules), but i'm interested to try your game. If i enjoy, you should have a review.
Follow my steam profil to see more.

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hello friend, could you send me your curators page so I can send you the keys through steam curator connect

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Hey. Thanks for reply. I can't put the link here (against the rules). I give it to you in an old GA.

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I send u invite in steam, add need to speak

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I own a steam group (french language)
Why not make a review for your game?
If I can help your team. I do it.

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hello friend, could you send me your curators page so I can send you the keys through steam curator connect

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I can make a positive review and I can help you translate from english to german ;)

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For now we do not have enough money to translate the game, although we appreciate your proposal, regarding the review, if you have a curator page, I will gladly send you the keys.

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I sent you a friend request ;)

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I would talk to you, that i don't need to be paid.

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The game looks pretty solid. Personally I'd remove the request for a positive review.

Your proposition's interesting, but personally I won't take advantage of it since while the game looks good, it's just not my cup of tea.

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I apologize for saying that the review had to be positive, what we are looking for is a review with a constructive or informative criticism, it does not have to be positive since that is against the rules, it was an error on my part since I do not know , I apologize

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Eh, no worries, it happens. Best of luck! :)

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I've checked a gameplay video on YT (unfortunately, your trailer does not show any real gameplay, you should include some gameplay video on your Steam store page). The game looks interesting for me (it's also recommended by one of the curators, that I follow), and Tower Defense is about the only kind of RTS games, that I enjoy.

I'm not a curator, yet, and it will still take me quite a while to become one, but if you like the way in which I write reviews, I will gladly write an honest review of Huusuienbu in a week or so (unless I find it right in the middle between Recommended and Not Recommended, in which case I will write my opinion in this thread).

P.S. I think, that you should edit your opening post, strike put "perform a positive or informative review about our game" and put something like "play out game shortly, and post on Steam an honest and thoughtful recommendation/review" in it's place.

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I agree about trailers and this an issue in other games as well; I almost never find real gameplay videos of games on the store page, I usually turn to YT for that.

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Hello friend, I have already fixed the publication, I apologize for making that big mistake, we have already sent a keys of our game to your curator page

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Nice to see the change. I'm not a curator, yet, so I didn't get the key (maybe one of curator groups, that I'm a member off has got it), but that's OK. Good luck :)

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I would love to try.. it seems good and I can see myself enjoy playing it..

Just wanted to know how much is its size so I can know how much of my data plan I can spare :3

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HELLO friend if you have a curator page I will gladly send you a keys of our game so that you can try our game and you can have fun

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Oh no I don't have a curator page never cared to create one as I just review from time to time and not on a usual basis.

If i don't qualify it's ok. Wish you luck tho.

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Closed 4 years ago by Khalaq.